Learn to SwimA poem about sandcastle citiesVijay PrashadAug 16, 20263573ShareThis Substack is reader-supported. To receive new posts and support my work, consider becoming a free or paid subscriber.SubscribeFirst draftBy dawn the masons left the wallsto dry beside the sea.A nurse unlocked the clinic doors;schoolchildren crossed the quay.The planners’ map, beneath its glass,showed drains in lines of blue.The clerk stamped every building safe.The monsoon bulletin withdrew.Along the seawall, screens displayednew towers, white and dry.Behind them, women cleared the siltwhile helicopters crossed the sky.At noon the river entered roomsthe survey marked as high.It lifted ledgers from the courtand beds where patients lie.The clinic lamps went out at three.The school bell struck below.A child watched alphabets dissolvewhere blackboard waters rose.Upstairs, the council met by phone.Its seal remained in view.They read the regulations twiceand found them sound and true.By evening, roofs moved through the streets.The maps stayed under glass.The rules remained in force all night.The city did not last.
Terima Kasih for a glimpse of your first draft with this beautiful meditation. Keeps it real as we learn to swim and build on water.
Soft and full of movement.
Thank you