A poem.
Truly a marvel of a poem
That's some pretty good iambic pentameter! Nice stuff.
Beautiful.
Brilliant, yaar!
Well done, Vijay. The imagery is gripping. The scene says it all. Trust the scene. Perhaps it may read more easily without the majuscules (capitalizing every line, a medieval tradition). Looking forward to your next.
✊🏾✊🏾
Moringa
Truly a marvel of a poem
That's some pretty good iambic pentameter! Nice stuff.
Beautiful.
Brilliant, yaar!
Well done, Vijay. The imagery is gripping. The scene says it all. Trust the scene. Perhaps it may read more easily without the majuscules (capitalizing every line, a medieval tradition). Looking forward to your next.
✊🏾✊🏾
Moringa